Probably for the best that she re-write it.
However, a note to Catholic Exchange. This is twice now that you've invited someone to engage Miss Eden's thesis, and twice it's wound you in hot water requiring later modifications (or in the case of the first one, you removed it from your site entirely.)
I think you guys need to hire another editor, or at least someone who can go over these works as a "hostile witness." Will save you lots of embarrassment, because you can bet several of us are saving the original copies. :)
Hopefully Dr. Smith also apologizes to Dawn Eden personally as well. In the end, we are "all on the same team." It would be good if our friends across the way remember that. I promise we will here in this small Kingdom.